Tuesday, October 28, 2008

PLN6


“Woman dies after shooting in Denver alley.” No information given for the author. After reading this article just one thing popped into my mind. There are only bad things happening in the world these days. Whenever you hear or watch the news, you don’t hear about good things, you hear about death. Like this woman that was shot and killed in an alley. Like always this crime was probably just some horrible person trying to make the world worse. It’s not fair to those who pay the price of death just because some crazy man shoots people up for the hell of it. It really makes me mad and I hope it makes you mad too. There are people everyday that are being killed for no reason at all like this 21 year old girl. She was young and still had a very long life ahead of her. This author had no intent of trying to catch the killer, but he was being paid to write the article. A person’s life is gone because of some person thinking they are above everybody else. In this story nothing mattered to the author.

2 comments:

MaureenI70464 said...

Jake- you did a good job explaining what happened and stating your opinion. Your follow up question was good and you had a lot of good points to go along with this. Your question was good because it was one that made you think. GOOD JOB!

joeyo2012 said...

good job jake well descriptive about the whole thing. and i dont know what to do to stop crime its something thats gonna be in the world for as long as the human race lives.